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1. 

   I.s.k.a.
   Member

   Hi everyone!

   iTIR Solutions is proud to present you Sparrow-powered game Balls in Box.
   Please check it out at http://itunes.apple.com/app/id448101311

   Any comments suggestions are welcome here or at http://support.itirsolutions.com/.

   Thank you

   Posted 9 months ago #
2. 

   Daniel
   Primary Feather

   I already tried it, and it's very well done!
   Furthermore, it's important to know that it's free!

   Posted 9 months ago #
3. 

   straydogstrut
   Administrator

   Congratulations on releasing your game! I've just tried it and I liked it, as Daniel says it's very well done. I just have a couple of little suggestions:

   First I think more of a description on the App Store page about what the game is about would help. I had an idea of what it would involve, but the current description didn't really motivate me to try it (but I did any way because it's made with Sparrow!! )

   Second, I noticed a small grammatical error. I think it was in the How To Play part. Something like 'When you run out of lives you loose'. It should be lose. Loose is the opposite of 'not tight' rather than meaning 'lost'. I also noticed the message when you do lose is something like 'Haha you loose'. Again, it should be 'lost', and personally i'd prefer a gentler telling off like 'Oh dear, try again' rather than laughing at me every time I fail

   Last suggestion - I found the How To Play part a bit confusing. It starts by saying 'This is a ball, touch it' or something, but despite my efforts it seems I can't touch it until I skip the tutorial. That could be clearer. Also I think the touch carries through, either that or the ball is set to move immediately, as it seems to move as soon as I end the tutorial. Also, while I think tutorials on iPhone should be as short as possible, it might be helpful to mention combos and special balls. I found those two on my own.

   Nice game though, please don't take any of this as a criticism!

   I see it's already on the Games Powered by Sparrow page. Daniel, is there any way to have 'Games by this Developer' added to our profiles. Mine will be barren for a while, heh, but i'll get there some day!

   Posted 9 months ago #
4. 

   I.s.k.a.
   Member

   Thank you very much for response. I've fixed everything you've noted. Btw - the update will out soon - new 20 levels are awaiting you New commends are welcome!

   Posted 9 months ago #

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